Tuesday, September 20, 2022

Story of the week

Every week we share a story from our class that gets shared on the class blog. In our class we do free choice writing every week as we all are authors. Every week a story makes it to the class blog. 


How The Kiwi Lost Its Feather

Author- Sadaw

Year 5 Room 5 



Once upon a time, there lived a healthy family.

They had a farm at the side of their house and a forest nearby.

They didn’t know why people kept entering the forest.

Then one day, they figured out the answer…


While they were sitting at the dining table,

the father saw the word, “Kiwi” on the box.

He was confused at first, so he researched

and found out the answer. “The Kiwi is a bird!”

he exclaimed with delight.

He shared his discovery to his family and

they got excited just as he did.  


Next week, they all went out to the forest

and tried finding a kiwi at night. Soon after,

they heard a rustle in the distance.

The father ran as fast as he could,

and he… caught a kiwi! The kiwi looked frightened,

but the father realized he did bring some worms!

So the kiwi munched on the juicy worm and,

finally, she felt safe around the father.

After that, the father named the kiwi “Maple.”

Maple had a silky gold colour at the side of her beak.

The family knew they couldn’t keep Maple so they let her go.

They felt upset, but they knew it was the right thing to do. 


While they were walking away, the younger sister spotted a feather.

She realized that the feather looked like Maple’s feather,

so she took it to her family.

The feather became their best taonga

because it reminded them about their adorable kiwi bird!


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